Beta Reading Shop-Will Beta for Gold-CLOSED TO NEW REQUESTS

[Raneth]

Will do, Volatile-just send the payment

[Raneth]

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[Raneth]

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[CocoaLoco]

Username: CocoaLoco
Genre and Length of Work: 527 words, Horror/Fantasy/YA
Severity of critique: Third level, please! Tear it to shreds and stomps on the remains! I love it when people do that, and I really do need the help.
Price: 714 gold
What would like me to focus on about this piece? Is there anything you want me to ignore?
Believability, word flow, grammar/spelling, and the over-all quality. Please, ignore nothing.

I have to get this story severely nitpicked!

[Raneth]

Sure thing Cocoa, just send the story via PM and send the payment.

[Raneth]

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[Lunaheart]

I would ask for the Basic, but my work is a little long....12,297 words long...

[Raneth]

I'll take any length for a basic. It's your decision.

[Lunaheart]

Thing is....I don't have enough gold and when I post more...well...that will be too much gold by the time I have enough gold.