MagiStream

Posted: **July 22nd, 2009, 8:17:28 am**

I just thought i should say your help is appreciated but I want a comment on the Story not on Grammar and puncuation

Posted: **July 25th, 2009, 9:31:02 am**

can someone please comment on the story?

Posted: **July 25th, 2009, 10:18:55 am**

The story that can't be read for the grammar?

Posted: **July 25th, 2009, 12:08:16 pm**

Posted: **July 25th, 2009, 4:39:04 pm**

It is difficult to read the story and make any sense of it because the grammar is so mangled. We can't respond to the story if we can't read it.

Posted: **July 26th, 2009, 9:22:34 am**

Morgaln wrote:Please put in some interpunctation and paragraphs. Without any pauses, this is extremely hard to read.

I agree with Morgaln hard to read and without pauses....

Posted: **July 26th, 2009, 9:36:30 am**

Your sentences are like paragraphs,
Very hard to read indeed

Posted: **July 26th, 2009, 10:14:25 am**

you know please don't comment

How the gryphons Came to be and